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Instinctual Love by *Maang:iconMaang:



Building and mimicking true human thought
Beyond meandering lovers sad souls
Broad and breathing its false life it lives naught
Distressing lives lost, not in our control
Create and influence love in our lives
Yet ending abruptly our new formed bonds
A thieving foe, our joy does fate deprive
Minds cannot handle, so our heart responds
Choices endure, and in the end prove true
In our own hands, where our destiny lies
Mistakes can be made, but hope built anew
Our blind human eyes can see hope arise
Think and thought, thank and see what you missed
What our minds behold, forever persist.
©2008 *Maang
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Just another sonnet I had to write for school.
People seemed to particularly like this one, so I thought I'd submit it, what do you guys think? :D

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~FacelessxPuppet:iconFacelessxPuppet: May 16, 2008, 2:27:02 AM
I particularly like this one too =]
It's good.

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~shayerahol22:iconshayerahol22: May 19, 2008, 3:46:06 PM
:D I think it's really good too! *pwn'd* >>; Your poetry totally pwns mine out of the water. DX

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"Friends are the ones who sing the song of your heart after you've forgotten how it goes."
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*Maang:iconMaang: May 19, 2008, 5:03:43 PM
Thank joo quite a very much Shay :D
I wrote it in an hour, and tried to make it sound as complex and smart as possible xD

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world peace :earth::peace:
~shayerahol22:iconshayerahol22: May 19, 2008, 5:08:04 PM
xD Yeah, I totally do that too. I'll sit down, work on it, either finish it or never touch it again, unless it has my brain running in circles. >>;

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*Maang:iconMaang: May 19, 2008, 6:02:03 PM
Hahaha, well, great minds think alike xD

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world peace :earth::peace:
~shayerahol22:iconshayerahol22: May 19, 2008, 6:52:42 PM
absativalutely.

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"Friends are the ones who sing the song of your heart after you've forgotten how it goes."
~Unknown

no amm, YOU are the better artist. [link]